Activity 01
Sentence Surgery: Editing Rounds
Provide sample paragraphs with run-ons and fragments. In pairs, students highlight issues, rewrite for varied lengths and tense consistency, then compare revisions. End with sharing one improved sentence aloud.
Analyze how varying sentence length affects the rhythm of a paragraph.
Facilitation TipDuring Sentence Surgery, model how to read paragraphs aloud to hear monotony and emphasize the difference between flat and dynamic flow.
What to look forProvide students with a short, unedited paragraph containing inconsistent verb tenses and monotonous sentence length. Ask them to identify one instance of inconsistent tense and rewrite two sentences to vary their structure, explaining their changes.