Eliminating 'Dead Words' and Filler
A workshop on identifying and replacing 'dead words' and filler phrases to make writing more impactful and concise.
Key Questions
- How many adjectives can a writer remove before a sentence loses its meaning?
- Why are strong verbs more effective than adverbs in creating vivid imagery?
- Critique a sample paragraph for its use of filler words and suggest more concise alternatives.
Common Core State Standards
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