Activity 01
Pairs: Economy Rewrite
Pairs read a short story excerpt and underline redundant phrases. They rewrite the passage using 50% fewer words while preserving impact, then compare originals and revisions with the class. This highlights precise language choices.
Explain how the limited scope of a short story forces the author to be more economical with language.
Facilitation TipDuring Economy Rewrite, circulate with a checklist: Did students cut backstories without losing intrigue?
What to look forProvide students with a short story excerpt. Ask them to identify one instance of economical language and explain its effect, and to identify one symbol and its potential meaning.