Activity 01
Pairs: Dialogue Rewrite Challenge
Pairs select a 'tell' passage from a story, then rewrite it using 'show' techniques with dialogue and actions. They read rewrites aloud and peer-assess for trait revelation. Circulate to prompt deeper motivation links.
Explain how authors use 'show, don't tell' techniques to reveal character traits.
Facilitation TipDuring the Dialogue Rewrite Challenge, circulate and prompt pairs to ask: ‘Which line best reveals the character’s flaw? Why?’ to keep the focus on technique.
What to look forProvide students with a short passage featuring a character. Ask them to write two sentences identifying a character trait revealed through 'showing' and one sentence explaining how a specific action demonstrates that trait.