Activity 01
Inquiry Circle: The Sentence Surgeon
Groups are given 'sick' sentences (run-ons and fragments). They must use 'surgical tools' (commas, conjunctions, and periods) to fix the sentences and then explain to the 'hospital board' why their fix makes the sentence healthy.
How does changing the verb tense alter the timeline and clarity of a narrative?
Facilitation TipDuring The Sentence Surgeon, have students use colored pencils to mark different errors they find, such as fragments in red and run-ons in blue.
What to look forProvide students with a short paragraph containing errors in sentence structure (fragments, run-ons) and incorrect pronoun or verb tense usage. Ask them to identify and correct at least three errors, explaining their reasoning for each correction.