Activity 01
Peer Review: Connotation Swaps
Pairs exchange draft paragraphs from recent writing. Each identifies three vague words and proposes precise alternatives with rationale on connotation fit. They discuss changes and revise collaboratively before sharing one example with the class.
How does the nuance of a word change the reader's perception of a character's actions?
Facilitation TipDuring Peer Review: Connotation Swaps, circulate to ensure groups are not just replacing words but actively discussing the new connotations and their effects on the passage.
What to look forProvide students with a short paragraph describing a character's action. Ask them to rewrite one sentence, replacing a general verb (e.g., 'walked') with two more precise verbs, each carrying a different connotation (e.g., 'shuffled,' 'strode'). They should briefly explain the difference in perception each new verb creates.